Hi there Abby and welcome to Rebels & Mutineers! There are just a couple of things that need to be fixed up before we can sort you.

- your how your ability works section is deeply lacking, it's not enough that he just gets tired from flying all the time. You could add times when he's changed involuntarily, times when it's difficult to change, things like this to help flesh out the character

- this is silly, but can you name the oldest twin set in that first paragraph? It's really confusing to read when Nick and Nickie aren't named until a few paragraphs later.

-"Felicity hired a great lawyer" lawyers are expensive and great ones even more so. Maybe put in a little about how she was able to afford a great lawyer while supporting her large family? Did she seek out a domestic violence shelter? Did she get help from a family member or friend? Elaborate.

- you have a whole paragraph dedicated to how other players feel and reacted to being in California. I understand you're planning on making one of more of these family members, but refrain from telling others how their characters reacted. That is god-modding and it's frowned upon and just about every RP site known to man.

- how did Damion's loving mother and step-father react to him leaving California and going to New Orleans? You went to great lengths to mention how loving and doting the parents are, and then just dropped them once the family got to boarding school. Did the parents drop them? Explain this.

- nepotism is a thing, but what kind of counseling did he do with a barely-there high school education and a love of music? Is he a peer counselor? Is he a volunteer? Therapeutic work without at least a BA/BS is impossible.

- we have a trigger warning channel, and while you have made it very clear trigger warnings don't mean anything to you, they are important on this site and part of our rules that you agreed to when you made a character. Cancer is a trigger warning for some of our members, and you're choosing to ignore it and manipulating their mental health. Consider this your first warning on our three strike system.